Tuesday, June 29, 2021

Green Hummingbird Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sunshine was scintillating, for it was just past idle noon,
As the orange summer sun, endlessly chased after the moon.
I perceived a pretty hummingbird, upon a giant purple bloom,
Its irridescent green coloring, creating memories of June.
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Humming bird, a cute symbol of nature and its beautiful creations

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M Asim Nehal 30 June 2021

You for surely captured the beauty of the humming bird sucking the flower in your poem. Your poem is as wonderful as the picture. Full ***********

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Varsha M 29 June 2021

Hummingbird are sweet little angel. Your poem reminded me of a small sweet bird which visited my balcony a day or two ago. Beautiful composition full of positivity of sun and persistence of hummingbird.

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