Thursday, October 16, 2008

Green, Green, Green Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The smell is so fresh like when you pick a flower from an untouched garden.
The sounds of the animals taking you into your day dream,
and you don't want to let go.
The fresh air so pure and clean,
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Courtney Shanahan
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Courtney Shanahan 07 November 2010

Thanks Naida. I wrote that poem 2 years ago...... Haha

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Paul Buttigieg 14 December 2008

a lovely and well constructed poem at 13 years of age you can be proud. well Done

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