I wasn't your first, and you wasn't mine
The exchange of three words, sealed with a kiss
But we only met a couple months back
And it's now I start to discover your past
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No criticism Jealousy is a powerful emotion can lead to bad things if not handled right Good use of character as green eyed monster if that points towards you very clever. Good work hope to read more of your work.
tenebrously lovely phrase that: green-eyed-monster. its has a dark rich meaning to it. the poem spins around it well; curls infact, hotly.