Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Green Eyed Monster Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wasn't your first, and you wasn't mine
The exchange of three words, sealed with a kiss
But we only met a couple months back
And it's now I start to discover your past
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Ali Bear
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Sandy Player 11 January 2013

tenebrously lovely phrase that: green-eyed-monster. its has a dark rich meaning to it. the poem spins around it well; curls infact, hotly.

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Connor Whyte 14 December 2012

No criticism Jealousy is a powerful emotion can lead to bad things if not handled right Good use of character as green eyed monster if that points towards you very clever. Good work hope to read more of your work.

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