James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Green, Depths Of The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once again there we are as I wait, there I sit.
Hip deep in a sea of endless light green grass.
Dark beauty hidden in curls underneath of the moon.
Your moon comes between it and me.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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