Saturday, March 18, 2006

Green Clouds # 1 Comments

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The air smells salty, as if the ocean was but a kiss away
simmering sensations rotate over my head
like two red-hot branding irons hovering a hairsbreadth above my skull
beyond this comes the void,
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Poet Dragon
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***** ********* 18 March 2006

Hi Poet Dragon, This poem suits you name well. The not quite tangible feelings you describe are similar to astral travelling, so I've heard! lol The first lines are so cool, Just like an oceanic Kiss. Excellent mind expanding work. 10 from floating high Tai

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