Sunday, January 11, 2009

Green And Gold Comments

Rating: 3.5

'Nothing gold can stay'
You said...'but why? '
'It's nature's way'
(My weak reply) .
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Nomad Omnia
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Patrick McFarland 14 August 2009

The essence of 'good things come in small packages' Nomad. 10+

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Patti Masterman 13 August 2009

What a perfect trinket of a poem. I knew it would be wonderful just from the title. Just had that look about it. Guard this one well; don't lose track of it! (smile)

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Sandra Fowler 30 April 2009

Superb last stanza. It is a small gem of a poem. It needs no other words. Rare colours for a rare moment. Hold fast, it may not come again. Warm regards, Sandra

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~ Jon London ~ 13 April 2009

Lovely painting of words that bloom with loving colour and meaning

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Original Unknown Girl 10 March 2009

Strong imagery with so few words. HG: -) xx

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