Green Comments

Beautiful, warm and intimate. You are a wonderful word painter. Ten for this exceptional write. As always, Sandra

that is so magnificent. you are very talented and I like this poem very much. it has a deep feeling and I appreciate your sweet comment. you are doing a great job. keep going on and good luck.

Warm. Vibrant. Delicious. Poetry at its magnificent best.

There should be at least another dozen comments down here. I cannot help but think the others do not know what they are missing... This is gorgeous. Just before arriving at 'So it is with you and me: ', I had thought 'Oh, God....it's love'. The metaphor and imagery here is clear and un-convoluted yet unique and unexpected, your expression wonderful and the transition in the middle of this piece is smooth, but, also, impactful. There are, too, some terrific lines here and I completely adore the title for its simplicity AND spendor. I hope for you that this was written long enough ago that those two pools have since found their way to togetherness. Green from a distance is a torturous thing. Christine

This makes me wish for a love like your green, indissolubly one with another - Beautiful yes x