Greek Drama Comments

Max I enjoyed reading this piece, well-written with great visual and I wanted to know more about it. Bravo! !

Hi Max - I love that line about the crashed aeroplane - really sums up the devastion caused by rows. Nice one.

I rewrote this in iambic pentameter today, July 15. I wonder, if anyone happens by again, what you think?

After rereading it, I have to agree with Linda. avr

This little 'Greek drama' plays out well. I read through several times and decided I like the switch from third person to first. It gives more drama and the ending...pot roast...brings it back to reality. Raynette

A short story in itself. I don't mind the switch to the first person. It makes you realize that for every photograph there is another character - the photographer.

I like this, but when you switch from third person to first person, it throws it off. Try keeping it in the third person all the way through. avr