Greed...Of Death Comments

I love your use of rhyme here, James. Yhe poem was a pleasure to read and quit thought provoking. Ron

It was so nice, I read it thrice...thought provoking. I like.10 from me.

This life is not a blindfold chance, It's the fulfilment Of our imbalanced glance. It's not a jouney Of birth, death and rebirth, It is for equipoise with Perpetual bliss and mirth. The stream of life Never dries up, It changes its course Tastes new mix-up. It settles in the eternal ocean At its depth without commotion. CP

Philosophy in just a few lines better said than many a tome on same topic. Well done my friend. Regards, Susan

very different way of writting it but i like it, very unique, well written, well done

Life is full of 'why's' James. why this, why that, why should one, why don't we, why is there etc., We have questions repeating themselves right through our lives and we pretty well never get the answers on the really difficult ones. I like the way you have presented this 'question' short but very much to the point. Excellent thinking. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

James this is very inspiring and deep thought provoking.I never would have thought of greed in death.Much enjoyed.A great poem, thanks for sharing.a 10

You've given me something to think about.That must be good.

This is a fascinating and quite thought provoking poem, James. In our lives, there are many questions that go unanswered or are unanswerable. For example, who really shot JFK? Is there life beyond our wee solar system? Will the Cubs ever win a world series? Your fine poem, though brief, certainly gets the reader to thinking and is very well written as well. Carl.

something we may never know the answer to... but be it one or the other we can only do the best we can....

Written well and very thought provoking, has alot of depth to it to make one want to read it twice.... Very good.

Very profound write James, one to read again and again, 10 Lynda xx

This is my kind of poetry. Love the lines 'Ordained precise ......By destiny' and the ending lines too. Great job.

Very effective use of rhyme in this provocative piece. Take care. Kind regards, Sandra

Heavy thoughts for the reader. A lot involved in this short piece. Interesting. Best Wishes, Marilyn

very nice.. superb writing

substantial clever write...an inquisitive by all means about death...great verses...

Deep and ageless questions James - -and so concisely put that it leaves every reader asking the same - - you are in this piece wrapping up the subject in as least few lines as the questions warrant - - - so very cleverly written...... and 10 + + + + from Fay..xx

this is a short but deep within. I love the way you present this.It makes me ponder more the greed of death..But still, we have to be prepared, in case. I do love this, James. and thanks for the invite. God bless you..Shalom hugs, meggie

An extremely philosophical poem seeking answers, to allow the reader to delve deeply into mysteries. There is not enough space to answer for me, but the secret of the universe is miraculous.! Top marks for your clever invitation to wonder...