Greed Is Out Comments

it is fair To lock him up ‘Cause he is at the very top Of the super-kleptomaniac list. He is a mad genius; He killed telepathically, And he loved fame and money. human situations, corrupt politicians, crooked thinking....... we see all and understand it all but unable to react........ thank u dear poet for this poem. tony

No bail, no bail, For such a whale! Stock him in jail, Squish him in, Greed is out, Let’s spout, let’s shout! ....A brilliant poem Herbert! (10)

Bravo! A brave exposure of the crocodiles A very nice to read poems. I rated you 10, not only of the thought but of how it was written. Sometimes a poem is read because of how it was written, it becomes interesting! Keep on.

great work, full of true info, thanks ^_^

Nice Expressions with a right target

you hit the nail on the head, and he has to toss and turn while in his bed. his greed cost suffering and pain, and his clients will never be the same. a double ten

Very nice poem, this must be posted on editorials as an inser dedicated to the crocodiles of all corrupt countries... bravo!

I just LOVE the sound of this! Both the message as the rhymes in which it has been made.. : -)

i love this poem... greed.. a sin everyone falls into at some point in their life.. greatly written 10! !

In giving and sharing unselfishly do we find true treasures. :) Nice way of writing out what is not wanted or needed to be rich. DC

Reality is well expressed. Nice to read!

When greed is out, that will be a great day!

This is like the story of a duck that laid a golden egg each day. The greedy man cut its stomach to get more eggs, but got only one from the duck that died.

greed is one of the cardinal sins that which everyone seems to fall into one time or another in their life. well penned.

Great poem :) Simply wonderful

great writeITS HARD AND i LOVE IT

Greed causes much hardship.

haha this is a good one i like the theme

Humorously satirical. Beautiful write.

oh wow - i really like this! it reminds me of a poem i wrote called Occidental Fever, i'll put it on later. thQ for making me read your poetry.