... Greed...A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins Comments

i felt like i was being yelled at...that demon stuff is silly and doesn't work for me...or my guilty conscience...

it is like that.. nice piece.. well expressed

GREED! an interesting theme ! well structured the Beginning is powerful, you have exactly mentioned the well of GREED -SATAN- progression is continuous - needy demon, desires exploding… - give him more x 4 -- > this affirmation proves the endless DESIRES of GREEDY. the GREEDY is SELFISH, INSANE, EVIL; brings to Hell the End is powerful too, you have exactly mentioned the fate of GREED – NEVER BE FED –

Yes, It's true! ! ...10++ Merna

a ten from me! ! ! greed runs the world.

its an ok poem for me.

Hi Eyan - We live in a very greedy World. The source of GREED is SATAN (V 1) therefore it is a vice to avoided at all costs. GREED always wants more (V 2) which explains why the richest people are often the meanest - give little to Charity and by-pass the church plate. The end of the GREEDY PERSON is HELL (V 3) with the RICH the POOR end in Abraham's bosom. The friut of the SPIRIT is MODERATION & CONTENTMENT! Score it a MAX because it frightens me - even though I am not a GREEDY PERSON. Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

greed has unique form of hunger, you see...

gave you and your poem a 10..although short it was very vivid, and didnt leave much to the imagination..you could actually vizualize satan spitting forth the evil and greed..good writing

Strong images. Appropriate to the woes of the world. Sounds like a Paradise lost!

a superb poem with good descriptive words....great write....10

STRIKE THROUGH THE ACE OF BEST.....WELL DONE MY FRIEND THIS ONE IS SUPRBLY DONE AND WELL SAID.........I LOVED THE FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE USED...10++++++++++++

Woowww.. this is very powerful write.. very nicely expressed sir! ! ! Hey you are suppose to be Love Doctor Eyen the man huh? ? ? ? Now you have become quite a preacher! ! ! A good one at that., .. this is good 10 cheers shan

Cain was greedy and kept the best for himself. That's why God was not pleased with his offering because it was the left-overs. Greed, the second sin after the disobedience of eating from the tree of knowledge pertaining to good and evil.

How greed does has his way of consuming souls of selfish humans. You really painted an interesting picture of greed as one of satan's demons, he really does seem a demon. A well crafted piece.

really greed takes us there good poem

Surrealistic images with loaded signs. well made pomo poem. great to read. deserves 10++++

not only greed he is voracious old fellow, never satisfied, his flaming belly has an endless hunger, an endless craving for souls who are willing victims. A demon who is always in need and you're right. This is a good piece, I like it. Well done, mate.

'Even if he takes his victims to hell His hunger will never be fed! '...well, i think greedy is more than killing..my gosh. for the poem..this is nicely done... to the author...the 7 deadly sins are almost complete.. i guess, enough writing words like these..am so scared reading these lines..but, well you made this in a nice way, , ..