As you grow up in this world,
the facts and stories that were untold slowly unfold.
You are forced to bear a lot of pain
and you just can't complain.
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Beautiful. But I would say, love and greed are the two sides of the same coin. They are bad when we are too selfish and they become divine when we direct them to the welfare of mankind. CP
Well 'Greed' is indeed the greatest of all human vices. A human is rarely ever satisfied.
I am sure it is not so bad...neverthless sometimes the bad far outnumber the good. Anyway brilliant poem....
Through these few lines u have shown harsh realityof life. Quite meaningful
the truth abt this world is written beautifully........very nice...
There are good hearts in this world as well as the ones that would 'watch you bleed'.........I really enjoyed your poem. Nicely put together. Anna
u knw wat u ve wriiten is not true............... esp after knowing me..hahahha i dont like this..it sounds tooooo selfish n self centered
not all hearts and all humans are full of greed for the left outs one's heart should not bleed for the blood that knows to flow has a lot for the world to show the world that aint full of greed but the one full of human creed
'and nobody is bothered while you bleed. When this human heart is devoid of love and filled with greed! ! ! ' While this stanza is true...I do not think you can generalise...There are people around who care for those that bleed... Otherwise a good write...
When I was growing up I heard stories about angels and gods. While i began to see the world myself i realised its about devils and demons. Later i understood that I also have a devil within me thats why i am a part of this. Cant agree more on your poem. Such a short poems which describes the whole world (in just a few words) . You are great man. I like ur work.
heyyyyyyyyyy na its not true my heart is not filled with greed and does bleed when your in need wow great write a tenner from me anjali
‘When this human heart is devoid of love and filled with greed! ! ! ’ Bro... It’s not greed only but also suffers from ‘self-devaluation’ Nice poem Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK