Thursday, July 9, 2009

Greed. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you grow up in this world,
the facts and stories that were untold slowly unfold.
You are forced to bear a lot of pain
and you just can't complain.
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siddharth singh.
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‘When this human heart is devoid of love and filled with greed! ! ! ’ Bro... It’s not greed only but also suffers from ‘self-devaluation’ Nice poem Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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C. P. Sharma 29 March 2010

Beautiful. But I would say, love and greed are the two sides of the same coin. They are bad when we are too selfish and they become divine when we direct them to the welfare of mankind. CP

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Supriya Prathapan 28 March 2010

Well 'Greed' is indeed the greatest of all human vices. A human is rarely ever satisfied.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 21 February 2010

I am sure it is not so bad...neverthless sometimes the bad far outnumber the good. Anyway brilliant poem....

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Monica Singh 02 November 2009

Through these few lines u have shown harsh realityof life. Quite meaningful

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 28 October 2009

meaningful & truth of life....10

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Anupama Raghavendran 07 October 2009

the truth abt this world is written beautifully........very nice...

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Annabel Sheila 19 August 2009

There are good hearts in this world as well as the ones that would 'watch you bleed'.........I really enjoyed your poem. Nicely put together. Anna

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Krishna Bothra 19 August 2009

u knw wat u ve wriiten is not true............... esp after knowing me..hahahha i dont like this..it sounds tooooo selfish n self centered

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Milena Veleva 24 July 2009

and nobody is bothered while you bleed... 10+++

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Nikunj Sharma 20 July 2009

not all hearts and all humans are full of greed for the left outs one's heart should not bleed for the blood that knows to flow has a lot for the world to show the world that aint full of greed but the one full of human creed

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Sandra Martyres 14 July 2009

'and nobody is bothered while you bleed. When this human heart is devoid of love and filled with greed! ! ! ' While this stanza is true...I do not think you can generalise...There are people around who care for those that bleed... Otherwise a good write...

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Piyush Sharma 10 July 2009

When I was growing up I heard stories about angels and gods. While i began to see the world myself i realised its about devils and demons. Later i understood that I also have a devil within me thats why i am a part of this. Cant agree more on your poem. Such a short poems which describes the whole world (in just a few words) . You are great man. I like ur work.

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Anjali Sinha 09 July 2009

heyyyyyyyyyy na its not true my heart is not filled with greed and does bleed when your in need wow great write a tenner from me anjali

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