I tell you greed is grasping
It roots on acid ground
Sucks the juice of the muck
Even at the last gasp
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A genuine piece of poetry with great metaphorical allusions, depth, scathing criticisizm, satire, what not............ The subjects you choose, the way you treat them are almost similar to that of my style. But ur treatment is far better and more and more matured....Thank God! I saw ur poetry.
A very piece of work from you.Yes, 'GREED' is a big problem on this earth and, it is even becoming like a 'CREED'! Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.
and that is so true here in the Phils.. great poem send it 2 the president someday hehe just kidding u amazing -mel