Saturday, September 27, 2008

Greatness Of God Comments

Rating: 4.9

The greatness of our God is seen
in sky and sea and forest green
all living creatures great and small
Reveal the God who made them all
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Hannah Faye Pagayunan
COMMENTS
Jazib Kamalvi 16 August 2020

Such a nice poem, Faye P. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Egi David Perdana 01 October 2008

the world is beautiful, I love so much this poems

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 30 September 2008

I'm very impressed with your writing...excellent poem, please keep on writing, the world needs your words! -Cathy

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Ency Bearis 30 September 2008

a great poem..nicely narrated..a 10 4 this... Ency Bearis

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 September 2008

Hey, what a wonderful poem! You make it amazingly simple. Thanks a lot. I hope to read much more from you. Well-done.10+

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Lily Law 29 September 2008

nice expression plus good elements.. nice work! !

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Nia Riz 29 September 2008

hey! ! ...this poem is well written. specially the rhyming scheme makes it fun to read. keep it up and as evryone said.....you have a very good talent./...keep writing and hope you flourish.

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Junior Guajardo 29 September 2008

this poem is really nice hope you write more. You got a lot of talent don't wasted it

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Cassandra Chai 29 September 2008

A Very Beautiful Poem There! Keep Up The Great Job! =] It's Great To Know There's Another Person Who believes In God! =D Have Fun And Take Care! Good Luck! -Cassandra.

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Desiree Whitamore 29 September 2008

you're really only thirteen? ! this is a really good poem

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Pacific Hernandez 28 September 2008

A poem beautifully written in praise of God and His creations. I was surprised that a little girl like you can already write good poems. Follow the advice of Mr. Edgardo Tugade, you will reach farther.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 28 September 2008

it is a very nice poem.i like the lines 'The greatness of our God is seen in sky and sea and forest green'.

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Ency Bearis 28 September 2008

a great poem...excellent veses... Ency Bearis

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this was nice i loved it im very impressed im older however im 16 1/2 so ill read the rest of them funny titles by the way

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Kelcey Bridger 28 September 2008

Beautiful poem. i am turning 15 in a few weeks so im pretty young. but i think its pretty sweet when young people can write somethin that can make a diffrence..chack out my poems if ya get a chance! peacloveandhappieness! !

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Brianne Lindline 27 September 2008

Beautiful poem right there. I am actually only 14..so I'm young as well. I always like to see young artists such as yourself expressing their feelings through art like this. Hope you keep it up. -Brianne

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Jack Rollings 27 September 2008

That was a nice little peice of poetry.

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 September 2008

This was excellant rhythm and rhyme poetry. Something that I rarely see. It was a simple rhyme, but it was done as well as it could have been. I applaud the writer. GW62

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Edgardo Tugade 27 September 2008

You write well. My advice to young poets is to detach themselves from what they write in order to widen their world. Write about nature, other people, events that affect more than a few persons, yes, even faith. That would also expand your poetic range.

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Mehreen Mujeeb 27 September 2008

This is beautiful! ! You express yourself really well, your poem has simple words, but they are beautifully arranged. It's these kind of things we should notice.

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