Saturday, October 23, 2010

Great White Halls Comments

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I walk down the great white halls…
So clean and pure they blind the eyes.
Never have I seen anything like it before.
So much the silence…
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Kevin Carney
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Bert Bell 04 November 2010

A great, well-expressed idea, Kevin. You have something very lovely going on here. Imagery is great and some other nice textures that pulled me right into it. Nice poem.10

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