Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Great Uncle Arthur Comments

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Great uncle Arthur was never a master
of anything he tried either now or hereafter.
When he potted a plant it withered and died
and when he made jam it ran all over his hands.
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David Taylor
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Kate Richardson 15 October 2008

Nicely done, David. I really like your control of rhythm and rhyme, and you have created a character that is immediately endearing. Cheers!

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