Great Relief Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Great Relief

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Great relief
Saturday,14th September 2019

Nothing mattered
when earnestly uttered
the holy words in prayers
it was offering a soothing layer

what a great relief!
to feel so brief
about the grief
and still no worry to self

It is how I surrender
and offer
my indebtedness to your feet
and follow you on the water like ships fleet

I am cruising at speed
but with no greed
it has blessings from your side
I take no worry to decide

life has various colors
and honor to lead
but I read the clear message
that feels my age

Hasmukh Mehta

Great Relief
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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