(December 2013)
Patrick,
We spoke to your mum this week
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Hi Suman, thanks for your kind words they've added to my happiness! I'll review and comment on a few of your poems in the next day. Cheers!
Thank you for making God's message reach to us through this colourful ink! ................. i really enjoyed it. Sir. Be happy.
A great and true message here family first and God above all A great read Well done
Hi Hazel, many thanks for your insightful comment - much appreciated!
Hi Valsa, many thanks for your comments, most appreciated. In my universe, self is a given. Somewhere in grade 6 or 7 I remember learning this in a health class, before you can love others, you must learn to genuinely love yourself. Wise words! You might like to check out my poem, To You a Word.
Hi Mxolisi, thanks for your comment - much appreciated. I also received your message - I'm pleased that you enjoy the poems which flow through me. Cheers!
I Like These Lines =(some Souls Can Fool Others, Few Souls Can Fool all, But No Soul Fools God) They're Indeed Great News And A Great Poem! Keep Them Coming Mr. Barret, You Fascinate Us!
Great advice, we need to feed our soul and allow God to guide us through the tough times, with family and friends always by our side. Inspired write!
Oh... what a wonderful list of priorities! I perfectly agree with them! God, family, friends and dear ones, and then work ! I would like to include one more thing... self! We can achieve wholeness through this multipolar interdependance on God, Friends/ neighbours/ dear ones and Self... Your message has not fallen on deaf ears!
Hi Zaynub, thanks for your comment, much appreciated. If you're on the site I'll make it a point to review and comment on a few of your poems. Cheers!
An aweinspiring poem! Recuperation of d body indeed needs rejuvenation of d soul in spirituality as yor poem inspires. I admire yor words in advice.
Hi Rohan, thanks for your comments...much appreciated. I'm sure you'll be touched by many other of my poems. Like you I started writing in my mid teens and have been doing so ever since. You have been gifted with a tremendous talent and you're putting a big smile in my heart with what you've written to date. You may see some of my comments to you as hurtful....they're not intended to be. They're intended as observations to help you hone your skills....constructive comments! Cheers!
a great message.........family and friends indeed the best gifts and soul with its conscience is the best guides to the true path of heaven for mankind.....words so simple and didactic......deserves 10/10