Great Love Poem by Lily YANG

Great Love



The big red apples were sweet,
Each one was assigned by father;
New garment was warm plaid coat,
Each set was arranged by mother.

Friday, January 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: apple,childhood ,clothes,love,memory,parent
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
wearing new clothes and eating fruit for new year in my chilhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

Love! With your parents guiding you on. Nice work.

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James Mclain 01 January 2016

Father became like the year end, has faded. Mother in picture's in each one, she's flattered. Green apples, and red one's from a tree they once planted.. iip

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