Tuesday, April 21, 2009

Great Hopes Comments

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We come to life with no great aim,
But step by step, our souls flame.
We crawl before we learn to walk.
We babble before we learn to talk.
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Omar Osman Jabak
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

a great write..so profound and excellent..marvelous work!

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Blue Eyes 28 April 2009

This poem is full of wisdom and it is one of the elements that makes you who you are.A person who inspires, encourages, and devotes himself to help others. ..........A soul inspired by you......Tareq

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Wojja Fink 27 April 2009

like a light house by the sea your poem encourages...the once blind to see.....thank you....

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Delicate Heart 27 April 2009

A swaying piece of poetry, one may become lost whilst reading it, very tender poem which takes the he breath away with its delicasy keep writing these pearls of wisdom, you are our laureate.

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Aden orie 21 April 2009

Wow awesome poem, excellent choice of words. I wrote a poem like this 1 entitled 'See through the simple things' i whould love if you whould take a look

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