Monday, December 12, 2011

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Everyone kneels as you walk into the room,
It seems as if you’re made of gloom.
Mist for body, shadows for clothes,
Who you are everybody knows.
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Lenore Lee
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Kemo Ali 30 January 2012

wow....sounds just lovely...........its seems like you meant to place your words in each person that reads it.....ienjoyed reading it two times.......

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Candice freeman 26 December 2011

its really wonderful the way you write i was really feeling the story i felt as if i was there

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Jessie Hopkins 18 December 2011

Wow. Just... wow. :) I loved it! You are a wonderful and talented writer!

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Vipins Puthooran 15 December 2011

Yes, I like its complexities! ! ! A well-written poem! ! !

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Venus Martinez 12 December 2011

Wow. This is really great! It's a complex story, but everyone can understand it. I'm in love with it.

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Crimson Love 12 December 2011

I like how you told a truly interesting story, within the context of a poem, great stuff!

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