Everyone kneels as you walk into the room,
It seems as if you’re made of gloom.
Mist for body, shadows for clothes,
Who you are everybody knows.
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its really wonderful the way you write i was really feeling the story i felt as if i was there
Wow. Just... wow. :) I loved it! You are a wonderful and talented writer!
Yes, I like its complexities! ! ! A well-written poem! ! !
Wow. This is really great! It's a complex story, but everyone can understand it. I'm in love with it.
I like how you told a truly interesting story, within the context of a poem, great stuff!
wow....sounds just lovely...........its seems like you meant to place your words in each person that reads it.....ienjoyed reading it two times.......