Great Efforts Comments

very good Donna Silvey4 minutes ago i like it!

Interpretation Tanya KnightLess than a minute ago As with all poetry it is open to 'personal interpretation' based on our own emotional existence at the time of reading. For me, I see a struggle within the work place, society at large, with no real gratification. That you have moved on to a new location in hope that you will receive your dues (whatever they may be) . Regardless of where you were coming from I have taken what I needed and for that I thank you for this submission.

Anchor the ship with arms down Make our wish loudly known