Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Great Eagle Comments

Rating: 4.8

Great eagle spread your golden wings
Above the world, my load to bear
Transport me to the realm of kings
That I may find some solace there
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Valerie Dohren
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Valsa George 11 August 2012

What poignancy of feeling..... An anguished soul seeking to be freed of all fetters and merge with the blessed souls of Heaven..... Only a master craftsman can pack such a torrent of emotions in so concise a poem ! ! ! GREAT ! !

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Captain Cur 09 June 2012

Where the eagle soars, we are free. Wonderful, deep and symbolic poem. Great write.

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Melissa Carey 24 April 2012

WOW! ! ! ! ! Amazing! ! ! ! !

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Juan Olivarez 23 April 2012

Wow, what a piece, wow. Absolutely great.

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Hans Vr 23 April 2012

Valerie, This poem goes very deep. It is beautiful, touching, moving. The dream of the eagle lifting us up from our sorrows. A masterpiece of poetry

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Steven Cooke 22 April 2012

Love the images in this one. Excellent write

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Danny Draper 21 April 2012

Such wings set free in metaphor, above this earthly world to soar and free us in sublime verse once more.

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Smoky Hoss 18 April 2012

The spiritual sensation of soaring, how sweet it surely is!

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Sharad Juneja 18 April 2012

The words are ur babies... u know how to take care of them.....amazing one

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Dave Walker 17 April 2012

A beautiful poem, I think we all need to be free of everything, only if it's for a short time. Just to have total peace, no fears no pain and no hurt, just peace. A great write.

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Heather Wilson 17 April 2012

Another beautiful poem, you have such a wonderful way with words.

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G.R. Gaus 17 April 2012

Mark Twain once wrote; The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter, it's the difference between the lightning bug and lightning. You have certainly mastered the lightning part. Nice Flowing motion of words.

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Eric Cockrell 17 April 2012

the prayer of the soul yearning for freedom! great poem.

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