Monday, March 24, 2008

Grayscale Comments

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The archived rite returns in gothic gray:
a bruise-dark sky, a blunt and tugging rain,
a sheen of black umbrellas, spaded clay.
The camera obscura, mind, ingrains
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William F Dougherty
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Jim Hogg 26 April 2012

I've been here before. A mere four years more reveal even more riches - bring its power uncomfortably near.

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Not a member No 4 26 March 2008

Cinematically 'alive' with the atmospheric potency of a B & W reel. Swiss watch descriptive accuracy.

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Robert Howard 24 March 2008

Beautifully crafted. I felt as I was at the grave site holding a black umbrella to hold back the chill and bite of the rain. I agree with Bungay, the language is indeed masterful.

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W. D. Collis Bungay 24 March 2008

wow, this is brilliant. masterful use of language

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William F Dougherty

William F Dougherty

West Hartford, CT
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