The archived rite returns in gothic gray:
a bruise-dark sky, a blunt and tugging rain,
a sheen of black umbrellas, spaded clay.
The camera obscura, mind, ingrains
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Cinematically 'alive' with the atmospheric potency of a B & W reel. Swiss watch descriptive accuracy.
Beautifully crafted. I felt as I was at the grave site holding a black umbrella to hold back the chill and bite of the rain. I agree with Bungay, the language is indeed masterful.
I've been here before. A mere four years more reveal even more riches - bring its power uncomfortably near.