Monday, January 25, 2016

Gray World Comments

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The day was dreary,
And all that was near me
Seemed a lil ash gray
No birds were chirping
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Weldon Davis
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 January 2016

Wow, this poem must have painted me. I tune in to the music hits of my time (60's -70's) for they bring back a lot of good memories (vibes) and a lot of lost loves. I like the unique way you put the numbers - the 10 of you bursting out randomly like sparks, that's very pithy indeed.

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Weldon Davis

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Fayetteville NC USA
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