Monday, September 1, 2008

Gray Heart Comments

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I feel the beat
Die away
Beating faintly
Full of shame
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lizzy smith
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Min Sia 17 November 2008

It's really impressive..the words..the tone! I like the way you portrait suicide..with your age..it is a unique maturity! But in real life..please don't consider suicide..

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James Harding 03 September 2008

no offense your write was great but don't consider suicide cuz what if its ten times worse once you get to the other side

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