Monday, September 16, 2013

Gray Be Gone Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gray be gone today
That I've no time for your distraction.
I know you wait to steal my summer sun
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

A strong pen! ... signifying the sheer force of willpower that we can draw upon that enables us to change our sometimes gray skies...if not totally to blue... at least to a lighter hue...

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 16 September 2013

Graying is the symbol of aging and your poem very positively react to it.Very fine.I give 10/10 vote

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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