Sunday, September 6, 2009

Gray Comments

Rating: 5.0

it is raining gray
in this gray afternoon
small drops are falling
like a gray water sheet
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Steaua Fara Nume Adriana
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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 September 2009

then I fall asleep on my black keyboard having gray dreams of one more gray tomorrow............................wonderful write over the rune of dream, quite ingenious,10++, thanks for sharing

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Jaideep Garg 09 September 2009

lovely poem mam..indeed.....+10

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Harold K Schreiberg 09 September 2009

Lovely descriptions in this short poem within and without Just remember that poetry is a key to another dimension the gateway to Wonderland

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Hazem Al Jaber 09 September 2009

beautiful nicely one.. just wondering if you meant gray not grey.. keep on dear sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Marieta Maglas 08 September 2009

very well written poem, lovely to read............10

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Patrick A. Martin 07 September 2009

Nice poem greys okay just don't let it becaome black I think writing helps us avoid that 10

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