Saturday, March 28, 2020

Gravity Of Earth And Girth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Weighing hundred kilos on earth
You need never lose your self worth.
Just thirty-eight on Mars— so thin,
On Moon, no more than seventeen!
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mj Lemon 29 March 2020

Humorous and insightful! I read this gem several times and noted various definitions of 'gravity' impact the meaning. Both profound and humourous. A fantastic verse.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 March 2020

It was I thought was a light-hearted joke, but liked beyond my expectations, thanks indeed.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 March 2020

No, no you never are so fat, Only, you're on a wrong planet, You need never change food, Change the planet for good! FIND ONE WITHOUT ANIMAL OR MAN NO VIRUS BUT PENTY OF WOE-MEN LOL NICE HUMOUR POET AP UR A JOY TO READ HOW DO YOU FIND ME

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 March 2020

How do I find you? Humour you see on every view, Oxygen is breathed in everywhere, But you seem to thrive on humour.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 March 2020

A fascinating poem........10++++😮

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 March 2020

An attempt to cheer up the prevailing somber scene, thanks Rev BFA

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