Thursday, February 15, 2007

Gravity Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The map of years woven across your face
Tells of the journeys you took without me
But all paths pull me back to your eyes,
Intense and blue as ever
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Jayne Downing
Eyes
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Chuck Audette 12 March 2007

Liked this, lovely contrast between the ring wearer/gravity and the narrator. -chuck

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Aldo Kraas 15 February 2007

Nice poem Well written

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Séamus Fox 15 February 2007

Nice Jayne though sad well done! ! Glad ya made it this is a good site with (mostly) nice people! !

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Jayne Downing

Jayne Downing

West Midlands
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Jayne Downing
West Midlands
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