dawn tolls by dulcet tone from green
verdure riffles what it needs to know
universe flows by mystery of heaven
heart knows as it reels through
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heyyyyyyyyy here's a new twist to 'Gravity' superb write -10 anjali
so that is the thing called gravity! i didn't know. after reading the poem i'm stuck to earth more than before, with my wings already.
Your poem gives us the uniqueness of gravity and its use throughout. Your poem has captured the different ways gravity plays its role. Very good write. Your friend Lynn
From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !
Centre of earth attracts the objects and there is mutual attraction between each two objects.This way the laws of gravity and gravitation control the whole universe. I feel the poet wants to express that any natural phenomenon is based on gravity/gravitation. Very good usage of words as always and your poems engulf the readers into a world of imageries, occupied predominantly by the nature. I am unable to access to my message page therefore could not reply your messages.Extremely sorry for that Subhendu
a poem full of mystery and reality! ! ! Thought provoking and very well-written
The unalloyed beauty of intricate ideas leave the reader amused & amazed....Gr8 work.
(! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***gravity***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar.) … ripples seem to reel by sweet breeze as gravity draws mass to niche of earth as falling of apples to the touchstone…. _________________________ **With the beauty of pealing words, the poem finely sets forth a profound lesson concerning mysteries of gravity.