Tuesday, May 26, 2009

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She falls
Like a mountain slipping from the sea
She’s desolate
Yet she believes.
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 July 2009

fine wording indeed! ....10+

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Akram Saqib 05 June 2009

good use of a science term and knowledge

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Simran Sanganeria 04 June 2009

hey mehreen, good work as always.....: -)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Nice, melodious, touchy and lovely. Last conclusive stanza is beautiful.

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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