Saturday, October 3, 2009

Gravitational Defiance Comments

Rating: 4.6

Flying like an eagle
Every day of my life
Not like a chicken
Just to avoid strife
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Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
fly
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Clyde King 30 September 2022

Nicely expressed- cadence, rhyme scheme, feeling.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 September 2018

Have to come back to rate and put to my Poem List. It is hard to exercise your right to vote and rate because of the numerous ads put at the very end of poems.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 September 2018

Beautifully crafted. Very well written write.10+++ and on to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 September 2018

A powerful inspirational write. You captured the greatest attributes of an eagle. It will never surrender to the size or strength of its prey and keep on flying at the high altitude. Like in life, we should fly high and never surrender to any obstacles in life.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 August 2018

'Like an eagle Fly eagle fly' - that's the spirit! Your poem inspires me, and I can say it does so, to so many others too.

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Luke Hobbs 12 August 2018

I like your rhyme scheme and the comparisons between the birds and the lines defying gravity & mounting in the sky. I come from a place that has eagles so this one has a significance for me.

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chloe 25 July 2018

this is awesome I'm going to use it for my assessment

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chloe 25 July 2018

this poem is awesome I'm going to use it for my school assessment

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 May 2018

I am bold and brave Mounting in the sky Ever Conquering Until the day I die.....your expression reflects your courage and boldness which is a proven quality in you! You are a great poet my friend! I greatly admire your poetic acumen!

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Londis Carpenter 30 November 2017

Thank you Mr. Simon for Gravitational Defiance.

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Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2016

Wow. That's the spirit. Yes, no gravity can hold you down. I love the tone of self-assurance in this poem.

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Ging Taping 22 May 2015

Soar high and hit the mark :)

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 August 2014

Oh what an inspiring poem......Howard.......each and every piece of yours is precious and needs to be treasured in one's heart...........

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Dee Corpolongo 24 February 2014

Another excellent poem to inspire yourself and know that you are flying high in the sky....just like an eagle, fly, fly fly!

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John Brown 30 December 2013

Very inspirational poem, and well written.

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Bernard Snyder 08 March 2011

Well-written Mr.Howard! I rate this a 10' also.

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Smoky Hoss 14 February 2011

This is a powerful poem, well said in such few yet strong lines, like it very much!

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J Lee 01 October 2010

Not every one can fly without fear but ur poem sound like everyone can it quite a motivational poem I also hope one day i be able too fear of height is quite hard to overcome :) :) :) hahaha

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Billy Booza 12 April 2010

Oh how I feel like flying!

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Rufina Moor 03 April 2010

'Defying gravity Refusing to lose Not by luck or chance' This part touched me especially. Please keep writing because your words can touch people.

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