Flying like an eagle
Every day of my life
Not like a chicken
Just to avoid strife
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Have to come back to rate and put to my Poem List. It is hard to exercise your right to vote and rate because of the numerous ads put at the very end of poems.
Beautifully crafted. Very well written write.10+++ and on to my Poem List.
A powerful inspirational write. You captured the greatest attributes of an eagle. It will never surrender to the size or strength of its prey and keep on flying at the high altitude. Like in life, we should fly high and never surrender to any obstacles in life.
'Like an eagle Fly eagle fly' - that's the spirit! Your poem inspires me, and I can say it does so, to so many others too.
I like your rhyme scheme and the comparisons between the birds and the lines defying gravity & mounting in the sky. I come from a place that has eagles so this one has a significance for me.
I am bold and brave Mounting in the sky Ever Conquering Until the day I die.....your expression reflects your courage and boldness which is a proven quality in you! You are a great poet my friend! I greatly admire your poetic acumen!
Wow. That's the spirit. Yes, no gravity can hold you down. I love the tone of self-assurance in this poem.
Oh what an inspiring poem......Howard.......each and every piece of yours is precious and needs to be treasured in one's heart...........
Another excellent poem to inspire yourself and know that you are flying high in the sky....just like an eagle, fly, fly fly!
This is a powerful poem, well said in such few yet strong lines, like it very much!
Not every one can fly without fear but ur poem sound like everyone can it quite a motivational poem I also hope one day i be able too fear of height is quite hard to overcome :) :) :) hahaha
'Defying gravity Refusing to lose Not by luck or chance' This part touched me especially. Please keep writing because your words can touch people.
Nicely expressed- cadence, rhyme scheme, feeling.