Graveyard Night=+ Comments

Watching the clouds hideing the moon I wonder could this be my tomb great lines to an amazing ending my friend. you rhymed very well in this. very cool poem. good job. Becca

in my mind as I read this I see a vampire searching for a bed for the day...but that's just me...great poem here

hey this is a good one.....plz with due regards u have made a few spelling mistakes which spoils the fun..........keep up the good work

I like this one. it was written well.

Very good poem I loved the element of surprise in the end. Very creative.

Scary stuff.Gave me shivers.

very nice poem my friend. :)

It's very amusing when poetry sounds like our dreams

u were right i luv this poem! it's really good dark, sensitive, compleatly rawk awesum lol but anyways good work you've got talentXD

Lovely poem. I love the night hehe. 20/10 ^_^ -Tess C.

very interesting. great job.