Graveyard Comments

So they took off, be aware The eyes of the dark following them But when would they return? After those terrible deaths they suffered The sounds grew louder, when they approached farther The clinking and groaning still behind them...it was so tragic and unexpected and ever witnessed by us.. but after it is nature that makes end equall whether we like it or not.. it is so meaningful andtouchy poem n i was moved by it....10 read mine i am disgrace.... rest in peace

Tragedies because of Nature Is it because we keep pushing Nature to the edge that sometimes The backlash comes to swallow Us in the form of lava, earthquakes And tsunami waves! The Tsunami left its mark on each and all showing us the other ruthless side to Natures face. Angel.

You are so young for such grave poetry but your thoughts belong to happier thoughts for one so young IVOT

aishu, i read this poem earlier........ still i read it cause of the depth of pain.... i too had written a poem named tsunami. just go through it...10.......

its so nice my dear friend aiswarya......u r really talented..................! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Kewl. But i cant beliv dat ur 12! ! ur indian 4 gudness sake! y'z ur english so gud! !

You can't fight the fury of Nature, can you? The best we can do is bow down before it and surrender... This Poem is well penned I must add...

Great poem here, had ta give ye a ten, here! God bless poets, all-MJG.

Good Griff I felt like I was realy there in the graveyard YIKE! ! A+

Aishu ..u are a great budding poet...true write...love it, its theme...the way u prsent it.. Winnie

Aishu, I'm beginning to feel nervous now. I'm 12 but you are so much more better than I am. I love your poem! Amazing, incredible and you wrote it from your own experience. I guess it's time to say there is more to you than meets the eye. Well done! ! !

Great indeed! Thanks for sharing.

Great poem. I see lot of mature writings. Read my 'GRAVEYARD'.........9

I could taste the stench of gravyard subtly. Not being one for poems about graves, and the like, it was like a brisk but strong wind for me.

oh my god what is that great poem, oooh i like it really i like it cause i like this kind of words and poems, , , really it is great work.... well done

Horror has a human heart & nature has not shown mercy. It has for many times lift sore in our flesh & bones. I can imagine how painful it was during the Tsunami. thank for taking the courage to share thru your poem. great poem

Hi Aiswarya! This is really a great poem. I can't believe you're only 11 years old. God, you're really talented. Keep up writing. Best wishes

this is phenominal, keep up the great work.

Turbulent waves, Sinking shrieks, Uprooted lives, Numb minds, Agonized nations, Marooned bodies, Images of Tsunami

Firstly I'm shocked or rather impressed by your writing you are young to be able to express yourself like that but maturity has no age. Do you know that pen and a paper is the number therapy for the soul. Your piece is Beautiful. BLESSED Love