Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Graven Greediness Comments

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A child when born is without vice,
But he or she falls in greed when takes rice.
Among vices greediness is one like vice,
It does dilate everywhere like mice.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Innocence diminishes progressively on the path of man's life as greed develops. Life values are redefined. The need of devotion to God is emphasised gain peace

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 November 2014

Changing attitude and attribution of vice- (When I born I was Gangotri- I don't know why I have became Salty sea) the poem is about -how greed breeds and destroys - your pen runs on humanity and guidance of highway

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 November 2014

The very truth spelt out here that greed corrupts human minds....very well composed with wonderful and inspiring words........

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Hazel Durham 06 November 2014

So true greed is like a weed unsightly and of no use, shallow and bleak greed can't compete with love and kindness that blooms forever! Great write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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