Sunday, December 6, 2009

Gravel Comments

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At times I fear, when the distance seeps in mist
When gravel becomes weathered
And time’s gust keeps them untraced
And when all the faces
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Lekë Loshi
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J.M. Berger 01 January 2010

This poem creates a definite aura but I think, and this is just personally, that grammatically it is difficult to follow and that cuts some of its impact.

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Prishtina, Kosovo
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