GRAVE OF SOUL
In midst of my universe
I stand upon void by silence
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I adore this! You have a real gift at the art of writing. Thank you so much for posting it here!
A terse, fantastic, romantic poem.The poet has aptly expressed the situation when the human mind is skeptical in receiving love in equal proportion from the beloved.It creates an all pervading pain.But the doubt gets dispelled with the physical amalgamation.Very well written Subhendu as always.
Sad and emotional, grave, indeed! But the emotion comes through to the reader intact.
darkness dispels illusion as you embrace me I feel disillusioned. ........ perhaps its much spoken about 'Grave of Soul'. Oh, poet, you are great, you don't know what you have written. Just try to feel it again. A poet friend.
very interesting poem...excellent philosophical piece, at the same time...thank you for sharing.. 10/10/10
a little bit vague...but thats the beauty of it. nice poem. thank you.
Deep and mysterious, well penned.