Saturday, March 22, 2014

Grave Confusion Comments

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Just a sight of my love
Convinced me
With a whisper
That all my dreams
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V P Mahur
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Roseann Shawiak 22 March 2014

Very intense poem. With every moving wave I am being carried away into my love's grave. This line struck home with me, it is the feeling that makes us want to join the one we love, even though it be in the grave. Great poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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