Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Grave Comments

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Take me away, take my soul away
dont say kind, sweet words on my grave
but that of me which everyone hates
waste no time of tears falling from your eyes
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Bellaina Bella Hernandez
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Silentpoet Grl 23 December 2011

A beautiful poem, Bella. I love your emotion in it- you wrote it wonderfully. Great job. Great final line lips already said its good-byes

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Shihabudheen K J 15 December 2011

So touching poem bella.the feeling of reality plus the divine death makes people moan after the demise of their kith or kin, but do no mind them on their lives.well written.your fan from india.

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