Tuesday, July 31, 2007

! Gratitude Dawning Comments

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Alarm clock. The sun rises.
The buses, railways, flights are running.
There’s a bottle of milk on the doorstep.
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Michael Shepherd
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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Bravo, I like the title also

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Ernestine Northover 01 August 2007

Great rendering here Michael, one certainly doesn't think about the 'givers' of all our incredible food etc., Brings one back down to earth when you realise these things' A super read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Michael Shepherd 31 July 2007

'cause we'm not got them newfangled fridgeraters, see..?

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David Taylor 31 July 2007

This poem's a bit rich, you really are milking it, if i phoned them to express my gratitude they'd probably say 'pull the udder one' in an indian accent......Milk deliveries have allways been a bit of a sacred cow in England especially for the older generation..... Love from David

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