Friday, December 16, 2022

Gratitude Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the deep gold-glow of the setting sun
I saw the coyote
run by a Saguaro
dropping the scant remains of a mouse.
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Smoky Hoss
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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

a million stars to light up the desert night watching over the coyote and the owl and the mouse who gave his life so that others could live---

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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

excellent, of course. I love how many different styles you use to write the words in your heart--this short story style is perfect for the tale of a coyote and elf owl and the cacti of the desert world--we too are grateful---grateful for your God-given gift of poetry

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M. Asim Nehal 18 December 2022

Excellent poem, liked it.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 December 2022

Not what I had expected re: gratitude theme. So, it was even more rewarding! Love it, Smoky!

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That was a very great experience, dear poet. Anecdotal poem, equally philosophical.5 *s

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2022

A wonderful poem dear poet Smoky....I liked it.

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Belle Wassermeister 16 December 2022

Beautiful poem, Smoky! Five stars!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 December 2022

Wonderful Smoky Bravo! ! !

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David Wood 16 December 2022

Grateful for any morsel do doubt!

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