Saturday, February 25, 2012

Grassy Tongue Comments

Rating: 4.8

Busy road, everybody is busy
To destination, home, office,
With set mind, nothing is seen
Except their goal, this is the story
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Tim Stensloff 18 March 2012

I love the somewhat confused nature of this poem. You truly do sense the feeling of puzzlement throughout. Also, what a quote at the end. A tongue full of taste and/ The other a grassy tongue. It's so surreal, yet the imagine beams through so clearly.

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