No one is missing, no one is missing,
Every white grass flower is kissing sun,
Autumn sun is bright in day sky of love,
A fable of love is written in fest of joy,
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There's always a twinge of nostalgia and remorse in St. Valentine (the figure and the day) . You capture those romantic elements perfectly, Kumarmani. A magnificent poem.
Every white grass flower is in competition, All are kissing and kissing sun more and more, Without missing the nice chance in hand, Every grass lover is trying to burn wings, - -love the way you handled this lovely topic! 10+++++
Beautifully heart felt and romantic! .. Beautiful days as nature touches the heart in so many ways! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
No one is missing, no one is missing, Every white grass flower is kissing sun, Autumn sun is bright in day sky of love, A fable of love is written in fest of joy, .....sparkling poetic expression! A magnificent work! (10)
The allusion at Romeo and Juliet is most wonderful! This poem beautifully blends the aspects of nature with those of the human heart! Contrary to Valentine's Day, celebrated in February, it is said that most couples fall in love in Autumn! (myself, too!) .
u r a natural messenger of sun and beauty submerged in the honey of love divine salutation sir KMJI
A beautiful poem of natures gift that grows all around us? .......wonderfully written Kumarmani
Almighty is ever kind to us, this earth with all its' vegetation is mercy to us.Sun and moon, Day and Night, Wind and Water and everything is indeed a source of life for mankind...Nice poem...10++++++++++
What an imagination really! Sun is Romeo and beautiful scene you have captured in romantic way. Fantastic sharing! This is a dreamy poem.
A brilliant poem about the blissful nature.It fills the heart with positive vibes.God's grace is there for every body.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
A wonderful poem that captures the beauty and wonders of nature. I concur to the beautiful comment of Akhtar Jawad. 10+++
We all are thankful to the kisses of sun providing us with energy that makes us capable of living and loving. A beautiful poem.
I love grass and sunlight falling on it in winter. I have played a lot on grass in our school garden. I have remembered everything. Your poem is interesting to me.