Monday, October 8, 2018

Grass Flowers Kissing Sun Comments

Rating: 4.8

No one is missing, no one is missing,
Every white grass flower is kissing sun,
Autumn sun is bright in day sky of love,
A fable of love is written in fest of joy,
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Pushpendra Patel 07 June 2020

I love grass and sunlight falling on it in winter. I have played a lot on grass in our school garden. I have remembered everything. Your poem is interesting to me.

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Mj Lemon 19 November 2018

There's always a twinge of nostalgia and remorse in St. Valentine (the figure and the day) . You capture those romantic elements perfectly, Kumarmani. A magnificent poem.

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Susan Williams 18 October 2018

Every white grass flower is in competition, All are kissing and kissing sun more and more, Without missing the nice chance in hand, Every grass lover is trying to burn wings, - -love the way you handled this lovely topic! 10+++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 October 2018

Beautifully heart felt and romantic! .. Beautiful days as nature touches the heart in so many ways! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 October 2018

No one is missing, no one is missing, Every white grass flower is kissing sun, Autumn sun is bright in day sky of love, A fable of love is written in fest of joy, .....sparkling poetic expression! A magnificent work! (10)

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 October 2018

The allusion at Romeo and Juliet is most wonderful! This poem beautifully blends the aspects of nature with those of the human heart! Contrary to Valentine's Day, celebrated in February, it is said that most couples fall in love in Autumn! (myself, too!) .

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 October 2018

interesting and so beautifully penned like and enjoy it

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 October 2018

u r a natural messenger of sun and beauty submerged in the honey of love divine salutation sir KMJI

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Tom Allport 09 October 2018

A beautiful poem of natures gift that grows all around us? .......wonderfully written Kumarmani

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M Asim Nehal 09 October 2018

Almighty is ever kind to us, this earth with all its' vegetation is mercy to us.Sun and moon, Day and Night, Wind and Water and everything is indeed a source of life for mankind...Nice poem...10++++++++++

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Dogma Daniman 09 October 2018

What an imagination really! Sun is Romeo and beautiful scene you have captured in romantic way. Fantastic sharing! This is a dreamy poem.

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Bharati Nayak 08 October 2018

A brilliant poem about the blissful nature.It fills the heart with positive vibes.God's grace is there for every body.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 October 2018

A wonderful poem that captures the beauty and wonders of nature. I concur to the beautiful comment of Akhtar Jawad. 10+++

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Akhtar Jawad 08 October 2018

We all are thankful to the kisses of sun providing us with energy that makes us capable of living and loving. A beautiful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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