Grasping Love On Valentine's Night Comments
Walking blindly in the darkness I saw a light
In graceful human form it lit up the dark night
My eyes couldn't even perceive her identity
But for familiarisation we had the rest of eternity
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Hmmm, how to sum up this poem... intelligent embellishment. The opening two lines of your poem strapped me in for a rollercoaster ride. Not a single word is wasted (except when your 'drunk' - you see what I did there?) absolutley flawless. My praise could go on untill next valentine but I shall sum it up...10/10.
you made the rhyme perfect. this is a very beautiful piece bro.
What a sweet Valentine poem you have got here Yassar.I loved the rhyming.Its quite enchanting though!
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7/23/2025 10:34:12 AM # 1.0.0
I was totally into this poem. FANTASTIC I give you a 10 for sure!