Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Graphophilia* Comments

Rating: 3.4

She read the few lines once,
took words out of their context,
enjoyed them one by one,
then put them back in place
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C. P. Sharma 22 July 2009

One, this is a beautiful poem, cleverly crafted. I loved it. CP

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 June 2009

Words are words but the spaces between the words and between the lines and even behind the words and lines are much more tasteful I mean meaningful. Sometimes the best part of a writing peeps through these spaces. Wonderful poem, Onelia. Naseer

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Janice Windle 10 April 2009

I love the way you've given this all the sensuality of chocoholia, expressed the intensity of desire and the obsessive's technique of separating each atom for delectation, making the sensations last and intensify.... and licking out the dish as well! Masterful! xx Jan

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Donall Dempsey 09 April 2009

I read these few lines once then once again and wanted to go on reading them again and again.....perfectly packed poem with its oozing image invading my brain with its intense intimacy. I wanted to eat the words with my mind. I love the licking the space with the eyes and the words red hot and cooling and congealing into its amazing concept. What a great poem you have whipped up...one of your best...one of my favourites

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 08 April 2009

lovely piece, terse, thanks for sharing

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Do you remember 'A kiss is just a kiss...as time goes by'? They should be from the Casablanca's theme. And we could say: 'A word is just a word...'. However words are so important, they take tastes and scents with them. In this poem the author writes in rhyme.

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Allemagne Roßmann 07 April 2009

Beauty and ecstasy chasing each other.....

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T McH 05 April 2009

You are a seriously clever girl. Your poetry is a beaty to behold. t x

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Original Unknown Girl 31 March 2009

Wowser! ! ! How did I miss this one? ? ? It is sublime.... very gorgeous and erotica personifed. Love it.... HG: -) xx

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Emancipation Planz 31 March 2009

Lovely ONE.. I say IT again... in printed Feelia 'You are the Specialist specialist'... tis graffitically GRAND! ! ! much of the aroha, Deana xx

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Indira Babbellapati 31 March 2009

mmm...first time i hear of this abnormal condition...u must be a good baker!

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