Tuesday, July 15, 2008

Grapes Of Wrath Comments

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The grapes of Wrath fell in the bath
and sank right to the bottom,
he fished one out from under Kath
committing an erratum.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

if I could write poems that rhyme and have a great rhythmic beat to them I would want to write like you, often I read your work but do not comment as sometimes I feel a little out of my depth when it comes to your style however I have consumed much coffee today and have received a pat on the back from my boss so hey why not. I particularly liked the third stanza, as two of my favourite things are bubble- I am a West Ham Fan, and Beer! regardo Vincent

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Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

if I could write poems that rhyme and have a great rhythmic beat to them I would want to write like you, often I read your work but do not comment as sometimes I feel a little out of my depth when it comes to your style however I have consumed much coffee today and have received a pat on the back from my boss so hey why not. I particularly liked the third stanza, as two of my favourite things are bubble- I am a West Ham Fan, and Beer! regardo Vincent

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Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

if I could write poems that rhyme and have a great rhythmic beat to them I would want to write like you, often I read your work but do not comment as sometimes I feel a little out of my depth when it comes to your style however I have consumed much coffee today and have received a pat on the back from my boss so hey why not. I particularly liked the third stanza, as two of my favourite things are bubble- I am a West Ham Fan, and Beer! regardo Vincent

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