Tuesday, December 28, 2010

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How she would smile
He would not reply
Now she is gone
He buys a gun
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Kolabomi Adeko
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Ifedayo Oshin 06 August 2011

some lessons to learn from your poem, Kola.. thanks for sharing this... granted can be a bad word some days... when she weeps, he sleeps, now she leaves, he grieves... on and on the rhyme goes... good effort, brother!

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