you are the last twinkle in the sky before the dawn breaks
the precious candle that never dies
a piece of heaven is what you are
a darling soul from afar
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ah nice poem please so creative also well penned ideas well done there luwi
A lovely poem Adens with heartfelt verses...
written with a silver pen....keep em' comin...we need more who speak from the soul.....
o wow, this one has so much honest depth and beauty. It is very convincing! I truly thought it was BEAUTIFUL!
nice extended metaphor you are the last twinkle in the sky before the dawn breaks the precious candle that never dies nice lyric poem 10