Monday, November 23, 2009

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you are the last twinkle in the sky before the dawn breaks
the precious candle that never dies
a piece of heaven is what you are
a darling soul from afar
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Adens Kamwi
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Marieta Maglas 24 November 2009

nice extended metaphor you are the last twinkle in the sky before the dawn breaks the precious candle that never dies nice lyric poem 10

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Obinna Eruchie 24 November 2009

Heartwarming words you have penned.

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Luwi Habte 24 November 2009

ah nice poem please so creative also well penned ideas well done there luwi

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A lovely poem Adens with heartfelt verses...

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Bryan Alexander 23 November 2009

written with a silver pen....keep em' comin...we need more who speak from the soul.....

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Hannah Adams 23 November 2009

o wow, this one has so much honest depth and beauty. It is very convincing! I truly thought it was BEAUTIFUL!

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Adens Kamwi

Adens Kamwi

Katima Mulilo, Namibia
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