Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Granpa Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The house vibrated
when the fat man snored.
Windows rattled,
noise shuddered the floors.
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Walterrean Salley 29 June 2012

You’ve painted a vivid picture. Sounds like a scene in a sitcom.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 May 2019

Thanks for your comment. Very pleasing.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 June 2010

‘Snoring 'Amusing Breath holding Foreboding Side changing Helps stopping ~ [sleep apnea]’ ~ niv Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sally 28 August 2022

Hi! Niv I'm glad you're around.

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Sandra Fowler 09 September 2009

Amusing. Great use of metaphor. Your grandfather comes across as a very strong, larger than life figure in this poem. Very original, Sally. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sally 28 August 2022

Thanks for your comment, Sandra

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 28 April 2009

this poem reminds me of my grandpa ='(a moving poem my friend..truly spectacular

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Sally 28 August 2022

Hi! Glad of your support, Mel

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Sid John Gardner. 28 April 2009

Superb imagery Sally.Enjoyed this one.Thanks for sharing a lighter note.zzzzzzz. Sid x.

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Sally 28 August 2022

Hi! There, Sid. Glad you enjoyed the piece.

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